Project Description Final

TechQuest

The Problem of Practice:

The compelling problem of practice I am addressing is student's not taking ownership of their writing and seeing a quality piece through to the end.

My first graders have a difficult time applying the skills we have been working on all year for the writing process in Writer's Workshop to their written pieces. The students typically remember part of what is learned at different times. When it all has to come together it is difficult for them to apply the writing process.

They don't understand that a good author rereads, reflects on, and edits their pieces. They often forget that writing is meant to be read, not just pushed aside after they have filled their page. I want their writing to be something they are proud of and want to showcase.

Learning how to be a good writer is an important skill. It is part of the literacy equation to build good readers and thinkers. It helps with storytelling and expression. Writing and being able to put coherent thoughts together is an important life skill that they will need all through schooling and in future professions.

Plan for Solution: The Quest For Buried Treasure

The proposed solution is to break up the writing process into a series of technology based mini-lessons to complete during a Writer's Workshop unit. Everyone has a story. The problem is they are buried deep inside us as treasures waiting to be found. These mini-lessons will see the students brainstorming, writing a rough draft, revising, editing, and publishing in the form of a Digital Anthology as they set out on their quest for buried treasure.

The students will receive a treasure map that has all of the mini lesson titles on it as stops. After successfully completing each lesson the child will receive a sticker to place on their map signifying completion of the task. The treasure map will lead the way to the final project for the unit where they will get to showcase their treasure of a story. I will also create the map in interactive Notebook Software to be displayed on the SmartBoard. An icon of a ship will travel around the map to the different mini-lessons so the students have a visual of their progress toward the completion of their project.

Phase 1: Brainstorming Ideas

• Lesson Title: Choosing Your Vessel
• The first thing needed to write a story is an idea. This idea, like the ship or vessel that takes an adventurer to their treasure, will be your vessel as you go through each step of the writing process looking for that amazing story. All of the decisions you make will depend on which idea you choose. This idea will be what you use for your travels in this unit.
• Using Kidspiration the children will record their great ideas for writing by creating an easy to read diagram.
• The student will start with their name in the center of a web diagram template. Arrows will point out from the center to create an empty web. The students will add text or clipart images of ideas they have for writing.
• Example: If the student would like to write about the time their dog jumped in the pool they may add clipart of a dog and a pool at the end of the arrow. Or they may also choose to add a text box that reads, "When my dog jumped in the pool"
• The student will fill in all of the empty arrows with small moment ideas from their own lives. They may scroll through clipart toi trigger ideas.
• When the student's web is complete it will be printed and kept in their writing folder.
• They will choose one of the topics to write about for this project.

Phase 2: Brainstorming Ideas for the Written Rough Draft

• Lesson Title: Laying Out The Plan
• An adventurer wouldn't set out for their burried treasure without a plan first! What route will they take...what should they bring along...what supplies do they need? The same is true for us as writers. We don't want to jump into writing our stories without first thinking about our idea and making a plan for what needs to be included.
• On day one, the students will draw a picture to use when writing their story. They will be instructed to both draw and label.
• On day two, the students will be instructed to add to their drawing through a simple PowerPoint slide show. The slide show will consist of slides with simple icons to prompt them to add specific information/labels to their pictures.
• Slide 1 - Eye: What did you see?
• Slide 2 -Ear: What did you hear?
• Slide 3 - Mouth: What did you or others say?
• Slide 4- Nose: What did you smell?
• Slide 5- Hand: What did you touch or feel?

**Take a photo of the child making a face they made at the time of the event depicted in their story. Encourage the child to let the emotion they felt take over their body as you snap the photo. This will be used in phase 4.

Phase 3: Writing the Rough Draft

• Lesson Title: The First Record of Our Journey
• And adventurer always takes notes and records what happens along the way. The same is true for writers! We need to begin recording our ideas in writing. This is called a rough draft.
• Model for the children how you use the ideas in your own picture to write a story. Have the children write a rough draft of their story.

Phase 4: Revising

• Lesson Title: Things Are About To Get Interesting!
• In this phase the children will revise their written piece over the course of a few days to make it more interesting. Each day will include various ways for the children to add style and voice to their writing.
• Using editing pens the children will add the following items to their story.

1. Adding Body Language and Emotion - The children will use the photograph of themselves to add emotion to their story. They will pay close attention to their body and facial expressions. (Example: My eyes opened wide. My mouth dropped open. My fingers curled up into fists.)
2. Adding Simile - Read as Quick as a Cricket. Discuss with the class what the boy means when he is comparing himself to the different animals. Show the beginning of the clip from You Tube, Rock and Learn. Challenge the kids to add a simile to their story.
3. Adding Onomatopoeia- Show the You Tube Video, Onomatopoeia Story. Discuss the effect of possibly repeating the chosen word. Example: Drip...drop...drip...drop...) Challenge the kids to add an onomatopoeia to their story. Challenge the kids to find a word or phrase that would have a good effect if repeated.
4. Adding interesting words - Show part of the Rock and Learn video where she chooses to add words with more interest. Challenge the children to find at least three places in their story where they used a boring word and change it to add interest.

Phase 5- Editing

• Lesson Title: Wrong Turn
• On an adventure it is easy to accidentally take a wrong turn. This happens to writers too! Writers get so excited about the words they have written that they forget to pay attention to conventions. That's okay. We can always go back and fix it.
• On the interactive white board choose sentences from stories the children wrote. Invite the children up to the board to fix the sentences. Focus on uppercase letters, spacing, punctuation, and spelling. With a partner, children look at their own stories and edit mistakes.

Phase 6 - (1) Publish in Writing (2) Publish as a Digital Anthology

• Lesson Title- Treasure at Last!
• It is always exciting to finally find that treasure you have been searching for! As writers you have been working hard to unbury the story deep inside you. Congratulations! You did it! Adventurers never keep the treasure hidden once they find it. The want to show it off. As a writer you should too.
• (1) Write a final copy of the story in the form of a paper book complete with a cover, dedication, and illustrations.
• (2) In PowerPoint create a Digital Anthology for the kids.
• Step 1 - Using KidPix, have the students create an illustration. This will be used in the anthology.
• Step 2- The students will each create 2 slides for this project. The first is a title and author slide with the picture of themselves they used in phase 4 inserted. The second slide is the image they created in KidPix. The students will record their voice reading their title and name on the first slide. They will read their story on the second slide.
• Teacher will format the PowerPoint with Action Buttons in a way that in the final copy of the Digital Anthology you may choose from a list which story you want to hear. This will be done from the first slide and then through action buttons the listener will be returned to the list after each story so they can choose another to hear.
• Each child will take home a burned CD of the Digital Anthology. The school library will also get a copy. Select stories may be played on the morning video announcements.

Plan for Implementation During This Course:

During this course I will be creating the treasure map, the template in Kidspiration for Phase 1, the PowerPoint Slides for Phase 2, Create template for Digital Anthology in Phase 6. I am currently teaching school in a year round program. During this course I will be implementing the digital anthology portion of the project with our end of the year writing project that we have already started. Next School year I would like to implement the TechQuest in its entirety.

Writing can be an overwhelming process for children. I am constantly looking for ways to make it an exciting and enjoyable experience for the children. I believe that looking at the writing process as an adventure will help the children keep their excitement as they stick with their writing to the end. By tackling the writing process one piece at a time the children will see it as small, fun tasks rather than a big looming cloud over them. The technology I have chosen for these tasks are things many of the children will come into class familiar with. They are also techno0logies that I already have access to in my school so cost will not be an issue.

Relevant Internet Resources:

1. Links to You Tube Videos within the Phases
2. Digital Story Teller - This website explains what a digital story teller is. This is what my students will be doing through their Digital Anthology.
3. Using digital camera's in the classroom - This teacher used a camera for writing. His project is much different from mine, but I was able to take what he used and change it to suit my needs.
4. Interactive White Board - This site tells some of the benefits of using the interactive white board with students.
5. Stories Going Digital - The Lesson laid out here is not exactly like mine. She talks about a few ways her kids make their stories into digital presentations. I wanted to have my students read their story into the computer so they could hear themselves reading it out loud. There are great ideas on this site that I would try in a different lesson, or for a different "treasure" at the end of a unit.

Someone Teaching -

• I will be teaching my first graders how to stick with a piece of writing through the writing process as they turn a piece of the writing into a piece to be proud of and showcase.

Someone Learning -

• The students will be learning how to use the writing process to produce quality writing.

Some Subject Matter -

• The Writing Process

In Some Setting -

• Elementary School Classroom